Ghost Editor

[Dank]

hey zone writer!

don't have a master's degree in english literature? don't know a metaphor from a simile? busting ass on your zone but don't care to spell check your prose?

ever see the popular television show "American Idol?" amazing how many millions of us think we're great singers until we're told we're tone deaf. no way! me? go to hell, simon!

same thing goes for writing. think your stuff is good? think it's perfect? you do? odds are it isn't.

stop getting crappy advice from your stoned roommate! avoid the embarassment of mixed tense! this ain't your mother's mud anymore, and great room descs make the zone!

if you've got some descs that you'd like a second opinion on, i'm offering to ghost edit your work... give you some prose advice or just help re-write and simplify.

if you're curious, send me one desc and i'll check it out.

[Arizhel]

I have it on good authority that Dank's writing is to be recommended. I've read it myself!

I'd be willing to do the same thing, if someone feels a demi-goddess is less intimidating than some copier-salesman-looking dude in a cleric suit.

I'm also fairly well-versed in worldbuilder (read: used it a few times ), and can make eeeeeevil recommendations for mob and room procs.

If I don't know the answer to your question, I'll just ask Step, and then take credit for it anyway.

[Arizhel]

Anyone who builds/works on/playtests a zone must stay out of said zone for 30 days after implementation.

This rule is not negated by any amount of crashes/reboots.

[Ciara]

Arizhel said:

Anyone who builds/works on/playtests a zone must stay out of said zone for 30 days after implementation.

This rule is not negated by any amount of crashes/reboots.

Ariz is correct on this and I am very strict about it. The 30 day rule is to give those who didn't have advance knowledge of a new zone a chance to learn it's secrets on their own and it's worked out well so far.

[Soul]

I might take you up on that Dank, I have a second zone that I am working on for Jedi and if Ego hadn't already helped me with the first one I submitted I could have definately used the help.